On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ondrej Lhotak wrote:
> I think it's good. I have a few minor things that could be fixed, but
> it's OK too if they aren't.
>
> I'd remove "Essentially" from the sentence "Essentially a numeric ID is
> used to record...".
>
> I'd change "primitively typed values" to "values of primitive type".
Done.
> I'd consider separating them into sections (cflow, around, etc.), but
> you've probably got them in chronological order of implementation, which
> makes sense too, and I can see that some would be hard to categorize.
They're actually in the order I remembered them :-) Feel free to change it
around as you think fit.
> I'd spell optimization with a 'z' :-)
You can bring people to England, but you can't civilise them...
Ganesh
Received on Wed Sep 15 01:14:08 2004
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